idk the word ur using should 作家 not 作社, and in here the world legacy well be better to use as 留給後人的東西 or遺贈 not 遺產 even though 遺產 is not wrong. so the title should be like 一位作家的遺贈 or 一位作家所留給後人的東西. and a unit for ppl is 位 not 個 lol "像"JURASSIC ＰＡＲＫ not "相", 我"從"小看她写的书, shock is "震撼" 驚奇is for surprise, it should be 对我来說這是一个很震撼的消息, again ppl should be 位 not 種
grammar problem: 真是("横"should be"很")可惜发生的事情 should be 發生這樣的事真是令人婉惜
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idk the word ur using should 作家 not 作社,
and in here the world legacy well be better to use as 留給後人的東西 or遺贈 not 遺產 even though 遺產 is not wrong. so the title should be like 一位作家的遺贈 or 一位作家所留給後人的東西.
and a unit for ppl is 位 not 個 lol
"像"JURASSIC ＰＡＲＫ not "相",
我"從"小看她写的书, shock is "震撼"
驚奇is for surprise, it should be 对我来說這是一个很震撼的消息, again ppl should be 位 not 種
grammar problem:
真是("横"should be"很")可惜发生的事情 should be 發生這樣的事真是令人婉惜
i guess that well be it XP
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